A new critique

Got another critique of a story I worked on a long time ago. I will share it below. I need to get good with my narratives…

Sorry I haven’t been posting a lot; I have a job that keeps going despite the epidemic, so I’m still working (at least.) Also been dealing with a bunch of doctors appointments. I’m planning on canceling Thursday’s. Not enough time in the year for this crap.

Anyway, here’s the critique I received. Let me know what you think (whether the guy was too rough on me or what) and till next time!!!

Published by dustyplz

A thirty-something from PA. Lives with his father and pet cat (Captain Admiral President Ninja Master Snuggy). Works part-time as a grocery clerk with the standard greater aspirations of not being a grocery clerk. Writes short stories and poetry when time permits. Other interests include reading, playing video games and revolution.

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